This was made with very sleepy eyes huehue
Hello to my 3 Original Character enthusiasts. Please excuse me for the long ramble I am about to go to. I'm going to show you an old backstory I had planned at first and why I changed some things.
But you can't start a story without knowing the characters. Here is a drawing I made that presents every character briefly mentioned:
So there's 9. 2 of which you may not recognize. Poe and Natsu were these 2 OC's I had since, 2022? I'm not as attached to them as I am to my current OC's, so now they're forever forgotten. I may bring them as background characters but for now they're in the void. Mazzy also had an eyepatch, which is pretty cool. It makes me wonder why I didn't keep it.
This is the, beginning. It dates back to June 29, 2024. "In a brief summary, Chester was 15 and Audrey and Chi were 10. The 2 girls knock on the door asking to be adopted. They go in and inside the house was Poe (the owner), Natsu, Mazzy and Rouve (the guests). They were a cool family, then Cyrus this loonatic sneakily stays in the house for 6 months before dissapearing forever. Chi and Audrey only knew of him, the rest never believed the two."
I never liked this because it felt incomplete, and I didn't want to make Cyrus' a side character never seen again. IDK. I also changed his age to be around the same as them, it felt odd thinking of him as a middle aged man something year old lol Does that make sense? I'm probably going to make less sense as I continue.
Next page and whoops. There's... Uh, I Chi'd all over the paper. I don't remember doing that. Luckily, it's still legible.
"In a brief summary, a HUGE 3 year time skip happens, Chester's 18, the kids 13. He's a college student so he doesn't see the kids much. It's sad. He come home late. He study so much. An unexpected house visit happens and he comes with his girlfriend Seule and they welcome her happily"
See, I don't know... I think I did keep this in did I. I didn't write it here but I had it originally planned that he went to this far away college, hours of driving and he stayed in a dorm. So nonsense lolol. He's in a nearby one now. He was studying culinary or something in relation to baking I think.
Page 3. Short summary than ever, the 2 kids catch Seule cheating because they were out and they saw her in the window! How unfaithful. The guy is unknown, maybe he didn't know or he was alright with it that is a mystery you must solve. The 2 kids make a revenge plan. Her birthday shall be an exposay...
What a bunch of petty 13 year olds. I liked where this is going yes, but further I'll explain WHY I never implemented this.
A short summary is that she got mad, broke up and she is now forever trying to dismantle the family. 3/4 of this was about this blue haired meanie! I dislike how ddddrrrraaaagggggeeeedddd ooonnn and rushed it felt at the same time. I rememeber when I was writing this, I was like "This is boring"!I had a planned story of this and it was originally going to be a cat and mouse kind of thing, The family stop Seule from doing Seule things. But wouldn't it get boring? I may still add stuff like that but I'm not sure. Reading what plans I had in mind for the story back then all feels weird compared to what I have now. It feels so different and similar at the same time. What do you think?
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